Star Trek: Deep Space Nine: The Long Mirage
by David R. George III
The Long Mirage picks up from the last David R. George III Deep Space Nine novel, Ascendance,
following up on the stories of Quark, Ro, Nog, Kira, and Odo, most
prominently. And this is absolutely going to sound like damning with
faint praise, but... it is a book about people with goals trying to accomplish them! After my frustrations with Ascendance ("Can
you really write sixty pages of a novel with no clear narrative
direction? Apparently so."), this is a blessed relief. Quark wants to
find Morn... and sets out to do so. Ro wants to avoid her boyfriend and
figure out her relationships with Quark... and sets out to do so. Nog
wants to fix Vic Fontaine's program... and sets out to do so. Kira wants
to figure out the mystery of the falsework and help with unrest on
Bajor... and sets out to do so. Odo wants to find out what's going on
with a Dominion ship approaching the station... and sets out to do so!
Amazingly competent plotting. I'll tackle each of these in turn, and
talk about the extent to which they work.
A long-deferred thread in this series has been what happened to
Morn... and to be honest, I don't think what happened to a glorified
extra is sufficiently interesting to drag out for years of both
publication time and story time. But in this book, instead of getting
updates on it from some other character, Quark actually goes to find out
for himself, and Ro comes with him. So that's nice, but in the end, the
two characters don't really accomplish much themselves; basically, they
bump into some other characters also looking for Morn, and those
characters tell them everything they want to know, and that's it. So
although Quark and Ro are actually taking action, their actions don't
really drive the narrative, nor do they really do anything interesting
or clever. Their relationship gets a couple good scenes but nothing in
it seems to really resolve or develop.
In the Nog plotline, he and Candlewood (DS9's science officer who, like most of the new crew, lacks any kind of personality or character hook) go into Vic's program to unravel its issues once and for all. Okay, so I am glad this has finally happened, but it beggars belief that it took Nog two years to undertake the really obvious action of asking Felix for help. What follows is a fun enough Las Vegas escapade, but like the Quark/Ro plot, it's undermined by someone turning up and explaining everything to Nog rather than Nog piecing anything together himself. On the other hand, Nog does get some good moments of coming up and executing a plan... which does actually work! Of all the book's plots, this is the most successful, though I wish it had felt like something was actually stake for Nog rather than us constantly being told this was the case. I also did appreciate how it turns out that the Morn and Vic plots actually go together.
The Kira plotline is okay. I can't really muster up any enthusiasm for her relationship with Altek Dans, and I refuse to believe there's anyone out there who can. I did like she got a classic Kira moment, in doing the right thing that no one else liked. I didn't find the resolution to the falsework dilemma very compelling; the whole thing about a remembered childhood comet seemed fairly uncompelling and circumstantial.
The Odo plotline is, alas, like the ones from earlier Deep Space Nine books, in that no one is called on to make a choice. The ship of Dominion refugees turns up, they tell Odo what they're doing, the end. There are no interesting decisions or character moments at all. Like, why even do this?
So yes... this is probably the best of the post-Destiny Deep Space Nine novels, in that the characters actually try to do things... but it's still pretty boring and could have been a lot better.
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Published: 2017 Acquired: May 2022 Read: March 2024 |
In the Nog plotline, he and Candlewood (DS9's science officer who, like most of the new crew, lacks any kind of personality or character hook) go into Vic's program to unravel its issues once and for all. Okay, so I am glad this has finally happened, but it beggars belief that it took Nog two years to undertake the really obvious action of asking Felix for help. What follows is a fun enough Las Vegas escapade, but like the Quark/Ro plot, it's undermined by someone turning up and explaining everything to Nog rather than Nog piecing anything together himself. On the other hand, Nog does get some good moments of coming up and executing a plan... which does actually work! Of all the book's plots, this is the most successful, though I wish it had felt like something was actually stake for Nog rather than us constantly being told this was the case. I also did appreciate how it turns out that the Morn and Vic plots actually go together.
The Kira plotline is okay. I can't really muster up any enthusiasm for her relationship with Altek Dans, and I refuse to believe there's anyone out there who can. I did like she got a classic Kira moment, in doing the right thing that no one else liked. I didn't find the resolution to the falsework dilemma very compelling; the whole thing about a remembered childhood comet seemed fairly uncompelling and circumstantial.
The Odo plotline is, alas, like the ones from earlier Deep Space Nine books, in that no one is called on to make a choice. The ship of Dominion refugees turns up, they tell Odo what they're doing, the end. There are no interesting decisions or character moments at all. Like, why even do this?
So yes... this is probably the best of the post-Destiny Deep Space Nine novels, in that the characters actually try to do things... but it's still pretty boring and could have been a lot better.
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- This does reference The Light Fantastic, but the Nog stuff doesn't have any reference to Force and Motion. We do learn a little bit about what the O'Brien kids are like as teenagers, though, which is nice.
- Occasionally we get scenes from the third-person limited perspectives of holosuite characters. I don't think this makes any real sense. Surely they do not have interiority?
- Characters in this book are often weirdly skeptical of people's claims to have traveled through time given this is, you know, Star Trek.
- Compared to other DS9 books of this era, this one has surprisingly little recapping; indeed, unlike Ascendance, which constantly recapped itself, this one barely recaps previous novels at all. Thank the Prophets!
I read Destiny-era Star Trek books in batches of five every
few months. Next up in sequence: Deep Space Nine: I, the Constable by Paula M. Block & Terry J. Erdmann
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