13 August 2019

Review: Transformers: The Wreckers Saga by Nick Roche, et al.

Comic trade paperback, n.pag.
Published 2018 (contents: 2010-18)
Acquired May 2019

Read July 2019
Transformers: The Wreckers Saga

Story: Nick Roche & James Roberts
Art: Nick Roche, Guido Guidi, John Wycough, Andrew Griffith, Geoff Senior, and Brendan Cahill
Colors: Josh Burcham, Joana Lafuente, and Josh Perez
Letters: Neil Uyetake, Chris Mowry, Tom B. Long, and Shawn Lee

Having enjoyed IDW's first two Wreckers comics, somehow I still missed the existence of a third, Requiem of the Wreckers until it was too late: the one-shot wasn't at my local comics shop, and wasn't even available at my usual aftermarket web site. It was collected in this trade paperback, but this trade paperback also collected the first two Wreckers miniseries, which I already owned, and I wasn't about to pay $20 for a collection of eleven issues that I already owned ten of. But then the collection appeared in my LCS's $5 discount pile on Free Comic Book Day, so of course I went for it.

The first time I read this comic, I kept forgetting who Impactor was. I'm so bad at robots.
from The Transformers: Last Stand of the Wreckers #2 (script by Nick Roche & James Roberts, art by Nick Roche & John Wycough)

I'm actually really glad I did. I liked Last Stand of the Wreckers and Sins of the Wreckers the first time around, and I'm not going to re-review them here, but I liked them even more a second time around, with a firmer grounding in Transformers lore, and knowledge of where the stories were ultimately going. Small details became significant with foreknowledge in mind, and reading Last Stand and Sins (and Requiem) back to back made how it's all one big story much more apparent. (Poor Guzzle.)

As you do.
from Transformers: Sins of the Wreckers #1 (script & art by Nick Roche)

Requiem is a fitting end for the whole saga, bringing together the villains of the first two stories, and tying off a lot of emotional and character threads, especially for Impactor and Springer, whose relationship is one of the backbones of the series. Kup is dead, so he can't feature like he did in the first two, but Roche turns that into a virtue.

Nooo, Ironfist/Fistiron!
from Transformers: Sins of the Wreckers #5 (script & art by Nick Roche)

I also appreciated the presence of Verity Carlo throughout. Verity was there when IDW's continuity began, so I'm glad Nick Roche kept her character going once Simon Furman left, and gave her an ending as IDW's entire universe drew to an end.

Hopefully if you lived through what Verity did, you'd gain some wisdom, too. I hope.
from Transformers: Requiem of the Wreckers Annual 2018 (script by Nick Roche, art by Brendan Cahill)

Roche is oft-praised by Transformers fans, I think, but probably still not praised enough. Of course he knows his continuity and stuff, and we like him for it, but even better, he understands character and theme. This is a saga about the damage war does, and how we need friendship to overcome it, and what the appropriate bounds of friendship allow for and what they do not. How do you forge an identity that meets the expectations your friends place upon you when the entire universe seems to be conspiring against you? This informs every character arc, every story beat. He also has a way with big crazy ideas, and his art is incredible stuff. James Roberts (co-writer on some of Last Stand) justly gets a lot of praise, but Roche is surely the talent of the IDW era. I hope IDW keep him involved in their new era, or that he goes on to do his own incredible stuff. Or you know, both.

Well, that's one kind of personal growth, I guess.
from Transformers: Requiem of the Wreckers Annual 2018 (script & art by Nick Roche)

Wreck and rule!

Next Week: Meanwhile, on Elonia... the universe is about to be devoured by Unicron!

12 August 2019

Review: Star Trek: Discovery: The Enterprise War by John Jackson Miller

Trade paperback, 420 pages
Published 2019

Acquired July 2019
Read August 2019
Star Trek: Discovery: The Enterprise War
by John Jackson Miller

The most recent Star Trek: Discovery novel once again has no scenes aboard the title ship. Instead, this book follows a year in the life of the USS Enterprise, showing what it was doing during Discovery's first season, leading up to its appearance in the season one finale, and retro-foreshadowing some of season 2.

I've always been a fan of Captain Pike's Enterprise-- I used to have a website on a shitty free hosting platform devoted to it-- and I was disappointed that the first Discovery novel, Desperate Hours, didn't quite lean into its Pikeness more. So of course I enjoyed this. At first it's a pretty action-y novel, as the Enterprise explores a dangerous region of space and ends up beset by aliens who kidnap a big chunk of the crew. Fun but disposable. But about halfway through, something dramatic happens, and the novel gets contemplative and atmospheric. I loved the difficult situation everyone ends up in, and I loved how they all handled it, and how it reveals so much about these people. Great big set pieces, awesome visuals of things I surprisingly can't remember being doing in Star Trek before. But also nice little touches, such as Nurse Carlotti's problem, or the role of shipwreck narratives. There are also some nice moments where the book joins

Miller also does a good job with the characters. His Captain Pike captures everything I liked about Anson Mount's portrayal, his Spock is excellent, and he does a strong job with other mainstays like Number One, Yeoman Colt, Nhan, and Doctor Boyce. I also really enjoyed the original character of Galadjian (I hope we see more of him somewhere, but I know by Discovery season 2 he's not around), and I was surprised by he journey Miller took Connolly on. At first the guy annoyed me just as he did in the season 2 premiere, but by novel's end, I understood and liked him and felt bad about how he was depicted in "Brother." Which, I guess, is what a good prequel does!

I'm not totally convinced by every aspect of the joining up, and some of the continuity-smoothing moments are groaners, but overall I really enjoyed this. I've been reading John Jackson Miller's Star Wars comics for over a decade, but this is the first prose fiction and the first Star Trek work I've read from him. He nails it in this universe as much as he did in that one.

09 August 2019

My 2019 Hugo Awards Ballot: Visual Categories

These are my ballots for Dublin 2019: An Irish Worldcon, with commentary, in the two Hugo categories for "Dramatic Presentations" and the "Best Graphic Story" category (i.e., comic books). I'll start with the story I ranked the lowest and move upwards. Links are to longer reviews when I have written such a thing, or where the story is freely and legally available on the Internet.

Best Dramatic Presentation (Long Form)


6. Avengers: Infinity War, written by Christopher Markus & Stephen McFeeley, directed by Anthony Russo & Joe Russo

Going into this film, I was convinced it was going to be terrible and there was no way they were going to pull it off. That they did pull it off is a testament to the skill of everyone involved, but I still don't think it's particularly great. Parts of it are clever and exceptional, but parts of it are bloated with spectacle. Characters have to make dumb choices a little too often to make the story work.

5. A Quiet Place, screenplay by Bryan Woods & Scott Beck and John Krasinski, directed by John Krasinski

A postapocalyptic horror thriller where people must make as little sound as possible: this was intense and well constructed. I think probably it was a better film than Sorry to Bother You or Black Panther. That I don't want to rank it higher than them reveals, I think, how voting in the Hugos is not just about quality, but about the best in a genre. It might be a better film than Sorry to Bother You but I don't think it's a better sf/f film. I told this to Hayley and she objected it was totally an sf premise, and she's right... but the movie isn't interested in doing sf things with that premise, it's interested in doing horror things. (I thought there were some pretty implausible parts of the premise, actually.) Those aren't mutually exclusive, of course, but the film definitely emphasize scares over, say, worldbuilding, and it's hard for me to point at A Quiet Place and say it's the best that sf on film has to offer even if it is very good.

4. Sorry to Bother You, written and directed by Boots Riley

If this whole film had been like its first two thirds, this would be hovering a little higher, probably just below Annihilation. It starts out a funny, dark comedy about a black guy trying to make it as telemarketer; once he learns how to adopt a "white voice" he's suddenly the superstar, right as his telemarketing workplace is unionizing. The scenes especially where he is initiated as a "power caller" are amazing. But if it had all been like its first two thirds, it wouldn't have been sfnal, not really, even if it does seem to take place about five minutes into the future. The last third gets strange, partially in ways that I liked, and that continue the satire of the beginning, but partially in ways that kind of make it feel like the film is floundering and doesn't know how to resolve. Great acting, great music, great visual gimmicks. Definitely more ambitious than Black Panther, but not as consistent in realizing its ambitions.

3. Black Panther, written by Ryan Coogler & Joe Robert Cole, directed by Ryan Coogler

I admired this film more than I loved it. Great cast, good worldbuilding, but ultimately it's a Marvel superhero film by the numbers. Which is an achievement in its own way, but I felt that like many Marvel movies, it tries to raise issues of complexity without dealing with their complexity. No one in Wakanda actually seems tempted by Killmonger's plan, which makes it all a little too easy for Black Panther to win everybody back; he himself doesn't feel like he quite goes low enough to ultimately be reborn.

2. Annihilation, written and directed by Alex Garland

This film was really captivating, making you feel strange and tense. Like Arrival on the 2017 ballot, this seems like the kind of thing the Hugos should be rewarding. Great music, great direction, one of Natalie Portman's greatest performances, astounding visuals, great sfnal ideas. I like stories that point at how big the universe is, and how unfriendly it is, and this definitely does that. Every time you think you have the lay of the land, the movie changes tack, up to the strangely beautiful ending. I feel sad this had to come out the same year as Into the Spider-Verse, as I would have ranked it #1 on, say, 2018's ballot.

1. Spider-Man: Into the Spider-Verse; screenplay by Phil Lord & Rodney Rothman; directed by Bob Persichetti, Peter Ramsey, & Rodney Rothman

I expected that I would like this; I did not expect that I would rank it so high. Funny, moving, clever, dramatic, it plays with superhero spectacle and interpersonal drama with equal astuteness, knowing how to mix them. Definitely the best Spider-Man film since Spider-Man 2; probably the best Spider-Man film of them all. If every superhero film was this good, the saturation of the genre would be worth it. Some Marvel movies feel manufactured (I enjoyed Captain Marvel, for example, but it's very Marvelly), but this one feels real. Plus it's just gorgeous, using the animation medium to its utmost, especially during the final battle. And the jokes. Oh the jokes! Honestly this is better than a Spider-Man cartoon movie had any right to be.

Best Dramatic Presentation (Short Form)


6. The Good Place, Chapter 31: "Jeremy Bearimy," written by Megan Amram, directed by Trent O'Donnell

Sometimes you can drop into a serialized show and figure out why you should care, and you do care. Sometimes you drop into a serialized show, however, and bunch of characters who were dead last time you saw them now live in Australia, and you spend the whole episode wondering what's going on. Lots of people go around doing things I didn't care about; the title of the episode comes from a joke I thought was vaguely amusing, but has nothing to do with anything.

5. Doctor Who 11x03: "Rosa," written by Malorie Blackman & Chris Chibnall, directed by Mark Tonderai

This episode-- Doctor Who Discovers Rosa Parks-- had its good and even great moments, but didn't come together. Like too many episodes of series 11, there are weird jumps in the story, bits that seem important but ultimately fizzle out. The Doctor feels curiously impotent, and there are spots where that's a feature, but too often it's a bug. I'm not surprised this was a finalist, though; it feels like the Doctor Who equivalent of Oscar-bait. (I nominated "It Takes You Away" personally, but I'm not surprised that didn't make the finalists list.)

4. The Expanse 3x13: "Abbadon's Gate," written by Daniel Abraham & Ty Franck and Naren Shankar, directed by Simon Cellan Jones

I was an avid viewer of The Expanse, but not long after I started watching season 3, I got busy somehow and fell away after just one episode, so I had to skip over eleven episodes to watch this and vote! But I figured it would be okay because between then and now, I'd read the book this season was based on. It kind of was. There are a number of characters in the show who are not in this particular book, and as a season finale of a serialized show, its pay-offs are mostly action/plot, and not emotional, which was the strength of book three. Plus, some aspects seemed overly compressed, especially the fall-out after the climax (book one got fifteen episodes, but book three only seven!). I enjoyed it fine, and could imagine myself enjoying it more if I rewatched it in context, though, and there were no glaring incompetencies as there sometimes were in "Rosa," so I gave it the edge.

3. The Good Place, Chapter 36: "Janet(s)," written by Josh Siegal & Dylan Morgan, directed by Morgan Sackett

This is the best episode of The Good Place of the four I've seen. I laughed at multiple jokes (I think for the first time), and it has an inventive premise: because the four main human characters have all been hidden inside the artificial construct Janet, the actress who plays Janet must play all four of them. (Most of the regular cast is barely in the episode.) She completely nails it, capturing their mannerisms and ways of speaking (without doing impressions) so well you kind of forget they're not being played by their normal actors. All that, plus a genuinely fun visit by Janet and Michael to Accounting, where the morality points people earn during their lives are reckoned. This is the first Good Place ep I've seen to actually make me want to watch the show. Thus, I could imagine myself wanting to rewatch it in a way that's not true of "Rosa," so I ranked it higher.

2. Doctor Who 11x06: "Demons of the Punjab," written by Vinay Patel, directed by Jamie Childs

I enjoyed this more than "Rosa": it's another "worthy" Doctor Who episode, this one is Doctor Who Discovers the Partition of India. It has nice human moments, and its lack of a real villain saves it from some of the problems that plagued a lot of other series 11 episodes. The thirteenth Doctor is at her best when being empathetic and enthusiastic, and this one did a great job with that.

1. Dirty Computer: An Emotion Picture by Janelle MonĂ¡e, directed by Andrew Donoho & Chuck Lightning, written by Chuck Lightning

I actually nominated this; it's a series of music videos from a concept album packaged into an overall narrative. Set in a dystopian future, Jane 57821 is captured by the government for being "dirty" (i.e., noncompliant), and we see her memories as they are "cleansed." It's visually amazing and inventive, and resonates with the contemporary moment metaphorically. It's unlike anything else on this shortlist, or unlike anything else I can remember, and that seems like the kind of thing worth awarding. (Incidentally, fact fans, this is one of three Dramatic Presentation finalists this year to star Tessa Thompson. She plays a very different character each time!)

Best Graphic Story


7. Monstress: Haven, script by Marjorie M. Liu, art by Sana Takeda

I liked the first volume of this series a lot, but with each successive volume, I enjoy it less. I'm happy other people are into it, and it seems a worthy finalist (and of course it's won the last two years), but it's hard for me to rank it remotely high.

6. Black Panther: Long Live the King; scripts by Nnedi Okorafor & Aaron Covington; art by AndrĂ© Lima AraĂºjo, Mario Del Pennino, and Tana Ford, Terry Pallot, & Scott Hanna

Three standalone stories in the world of Black Panther: a three-issue one where he investigates the cause of an earthquake/blackout and runs into an old childhood friend, a two-issue one where he seeks out the leader of a dangerous cult and runs into an old childhood friend, and and one-issue one about a Venomized Black Panther who chases down robbers and runs into an old childhood friend. Apparently there is only one way to generate character drama. The first two stories are okay but unremarkable superhero adventures. Good concepts, but largely nothing is done with them except for fight sequences, and the art looks good but struggles to communicate action. The third I had to stop reading halfway through because I didn't understand where an interim Black Panther who was a wheelchair-using Nigerian girl carrying the Venom symbiote fit into things; I googled and discovered the whole story takes place in an alternate universe, which the comic book collection itself completely fails to mention. Anyway, last story aside, I understood what was happening so I ranked it above Monstress.

5. No Award

I don't feel like the Hugo Award for Best Graphic Story is for merely competent superhero comics (even within the superhero genre, there is definitely better than Black Panther), so this seems like the kind of circumstance in which one ought to deploy No Award.

4. Abbott, script by Saldin Ahmed, art by Sami Kivelä

This was a fun comic book: a black journalist in Detroit in 1972 discovers that dark occult forces are at work, and only she can put the pieces together to stop them. It was fun, but not great, I think because honestly the supernatural stuff feels like a distraction because it's all kind of generic. I'd rather be reading a comic about a hard-nosed bisexual reporter investigating police corruption in Detroit, which seems much more unique than a comic about a woman encountering dark supernatural forces. Though of course then it couldn't be a Hugo finalist. Anyway, great art, strong dialogue and sense of character. Ahmed is clearly a rising star in comics.

3. Paper Girls 4, script by Brian K. Vaughan, art by Cliff Chiang

I felt this volume of Paper Girls was weaker than the volumes of Paper Girls on either side of it, but a weak volume of Paper Girls is still a comic book worth awarding. Vaughan and Chiang consistently do some of their best work here, month in, month out.

2. Saga, Volume 9, art by Fiona Staples, script by Brian K. Vaughan

Saga is always quality, and though I found aspects of volume 8 on the weaker side, volume 9 bounced back nicely, with some good character and thematic resolution. For me, Saga is slightly better than Paper Girls-- I think Vaughan has more to say in Saga-- so an above-average Saga wins out over a below-average Paper Girls even though they're both great comics.

1. On a Sunbeam by Tillie Walden 

Even though I really like both Paper Girls and Saga, I can't say I was excited to have them ranked up top. I feel like awards, especially genre awards, need to recognize works that are pushing forward. But Saga already won in 2013 for volume 1, and was a finalist in 2014, 2015, 2017, and 2018, while Paper Girls hasn't won yet but was a finalist in 2017 and 2018 already. All of my lower ranked placings also feel kind of recycled (Monstress already won in 2017 and 2018, even). But On a Sunbeam, which I read last, delighted and moved me. Walden takes the boarding-school story and the group-of-disparate-people-have-to-work-as-a-team-in-space story and makes something new in putting them together. Add a beautiful romance and even more beautiful art, and you have something quite amazing, something that even though it has many familiar elements, feels utterly unlike anything else I've read (except for maybe Moto Hagio). Great stuff, and quite obviously the most deserving of the award by far.

Overall Thoughts


Long-Form Dramatic Presentation was probably the strongest of these three categories, where I'd be reasonably happy if anything in my top five won. I appreciate how the Hugos always cause me to seek out a few non-franchise films I might not have gotten around to in a long time, if ever, otherwise. I don't think the eventual winner is as clear-cut as in some other years: Annihilation is my guess, but on the other hand, I feel like everyone who sees Into the Spider-Verse is taken by it. Short Form was kind of a muddle, but then it always is; even the stronger stuff here didn't blow me away. My guess is that the inexplicable and inscrutable love of the Hugo electorate for The Good Place causes "Janet(s)" to win. I really wish there was a more diverse pool of tv finalists, though; we supposedly live in the Golden Age of it after all!

Similarly, I wish Graphic Story was more diverse; as my comments on On a Sunbeam point to, there's been a lot of repetition in this category in just the three years I've been voting. I kind of have a feeling Monstress will threepeat, but I have no idea why people keep voting for it. I guess at least Schlock Mercenary no longer makes the ballot.

07 August 2019

Hugos 2019: Spinning Silver by Naomi Novik

Trade paperback, 474 pages
Published 2019 (originally 2018)

Acquired May 2019
Read July 2019
Spinning Silver by Naomi Novik

This was the last Best Novel finalist that I read for the 2019 Hugo Awards. It's a loose fairy tale retelling, and I was kind of dreading it because that kind of thing doesn't interest me, but I was soon sucked into it. Naomi Novik has constructed a fascinating world filled with a number of fully realized characters; I appreciated her ability to give us multiple protagonists whose goals are at odds with one another in pretty dramatic ways without compromising our empathy with any of them. I've never read anything by her before, but she writes really compellingly-- there were a couple sequences where I was utterly enthralled, on the edge of my seat with suspense. It helps that it's a very unpredictable novel (in a good way); it's not regurgitating some kind of stock plot you've seen a million times.

One of its most noteworthy features is that it has multiple first person narrators. Surprisingly, it rotates narrators even within chapters, and there are no obvious indicators of the switches; you have to pick up on who the "I" of each section is, though Novik is good about putting some kind of giveaway detail within the first couple sentences of each section. Even more surprisingly, it constantly adds on narrators, even hundreds of pages in, so you never know who you'll be hearing from next. Why do this, I wondered? One is, I think, that this is a book about spinning, about twisting fibers together to form yarn. The yarn is made up of individual strands-- just as stories are. The structure of the novel reminds us how there is no such thing as a standalone story, each person's story is made up of other stories in ways both small and big.

This is reinforced in a scene where one character's mother tells another character that the most one can do is help others, and do so cheerfully. Wanda was hired as a servant by Miryem, but Wanda's aid to Miryem's family went beyond what was required. The best people do good in the world where they can, and expect nothing in return, because you don't know how your story might affect someone else's. We see this quite literally in the novel in a scene where two groups of characters are staying in the same house, but in two different worlds, and each group of characters unwittingly helps the other group through their generosity. Like the best novels, Spinning Silver encourages an ethical orientation toward the world with its form and with its plot.
There are men who are wolves inside, and want to eat up other people to fill their bellies. That is what was in your house with you, all your life. But here you are with your brothers, and you are not eaten up, and there is not a wolf inside you. You have fed each other, and you kept the wolf away. That is all we can do for each other in the world, to keep the wolf away. (308)

06 August 2019

Review: Doctor Who: Shakedown by Terrance Dicks

Trade paperback, 285 pages
Published 2014 (originally 1995)
Acquired May 2019
Read June 2019
Doctor Who: Shakedown: The Monster Collection Edition
by Terrance Dicks

The seventh Doctor, Benny, Chris, and Roz encounter both the Sontarans and the Rutan in a cosmic plan of the Doctor's to make sure their war doesn't spill over into the rest of the galaxy. Like a lot of New Adventures, it follows a number of distinct threads: Chris and Roz chase a deranged serial killer on a noir planet, Benny investigates on a university planet, the crew of a space yacht has to contend with a Rutan stowaway and Sontaran boarding party, and the Doctor lurks at the margins. The best part is Chris and Roz; Dicks has a good handle on their voices, and you can tell he really loves this kind of corrupt city stuff. He did it well in Blood Harvest, and he would return to this same city-planet and some of its characters in Mean Streets. I really enjoyed all the stuff featuring them, from the stabby rat taxi driver to the charming Ogron police chief. On the other hand, I don't think Dicks has ever had a great handle on Benny. Did you know she is a professor and likes to drink? That seems to be about all he has ever figured out.

After a good opening and a decent middle (I didn't love the space yacht stuff, but it worked), it all fizzles out at the end. The Doctor having joined up with Chris and Roz, their plot ends up tying up with Benny's in a mind-boggling coincidence-- the serial killer they are chasing just happens to escape on a cruise liner going to the planet she is on! The planet is important to the plot, so I don't get why Dicks didn't have him just pick his destination. Once everyone converges on the planet, the way the Doctor saves the day is, to be frank, quite silly. I don't think it's meant to be comic, but it plays that way, and as if Dicks had no idea how to wrap it all up in the ten pages he had left.

I like the cover of my "Monster Collection" edition, very swish, but it was a bit incongruous that Dicks kept saying the Sontarans had red eyes and no lips, neither of which was true of the one on the cover!

Next Week: All caught up with my reviews of the New Adventures, so I'm rotating back to another one of my long-running reading projects... the Transformers!

05 August 2019

Review: Mister Miracle by Tom King, Mitch Gerads, et al.

Comic trade paperback, 300 pages
Published 2019 (contents: 2017-19)
Acquired February 2019
Read March 2019
Mister Miracle

Writer: Tom King
Artist: Mitch Gerads with Mike Norton
Colorist: Mitch Gerads with Jordie Bellaire
Letterer: Clayton Cowles

This feels to me like it finishes a thematic trilogy Tom King began in The Omega Men: The End Is Here and The Vision. Like those stories, it's about reconciling superpowered violence with living an everyday life. DC has often struggled to use the Fourth World in compelling ways post-Kirby, but King does great by them through doing something very un-Kirby. They're mythic gods on another plane, beings of immense power, but they're also kind of human; who else would write a scene where Mister Miracle and Kanto piss into a bottomless pit on Apokolips during a break in peace negotiations?

On another page, the panels actually follow the descent of a piss droplet into the pit as they talk.
from Mister Miracle vol. 4 #9 (art by Mitch Gerads)

King delves into some aspects of the Fourth World mythos that I feel like many have ignored. What was it like for Scott and Orion to both be sons of Highfather, in different ways that left them both feeling out of place? (Orion was adopted, and Scott given up to Darkseid.) What were the scars but also weird pleasures of being raised on Apokolips for Scott and Big Barda? If both Highfather and Orion were out of commission, wouldn't Scott become the new ruler of New Genesis?

Maybe this was my bias as a new father, but I loved all the parenting stuff in this series. Even this.
from Mister Miracle vol. 4 #2 (art by Mitch Gerads)

This is a story about war, about family, about escape. It's disturbing and hilarious in equal measure. Escape is the new component added here; I think both Omega Men and Vision suggested there was no such thing, but Mister Miracle always escapes. But what is escape when real life is the trap? At some point I need to go back and read all three comics straight through; I suspect it will be very rewarding.

02 August 2019

My 2019 Hugo Awards Ballot: Short Fiction Categories

As always has been my tradition the past few years, I'm writing up my votes in the various Hugo Award categories that I vote in, in advance of Dublin 2019, an Irish Worldcon. Here are my ballots (from lowest-ranked to highest) in each short fiction category, with commentary. Links are to where you can freely read the stories on-line (when possible) or to full reviews (if I did one).

Best Short Story


6. "The Rose MacGregor Drinking and Admiration Society" by T. Kingfisher
“Excuse me! I am a pooka! We drown people! None of this waiting around for them to die of a broken heart! We are efficient!”
This was cute: a group of mythical creatures that usually tempt women and then leave them with broken hearts congregate to discuss Rose MacGregor, the woman who left them with broken hearts. I liked its playfulness with an old trope, but ultimately it's more cute than substantial.

5. "The Tale of the Three Beautiful Raptor Sisters, and the Prince Who Was Made of Meat" by Brooke Bolander
Such a long face! Don’t concern yourself a feather-tip about that poor horse, shining claw of my foot’s delight, for it opened like a generous man’s gut beneath Ceecee’s teeth and talons and not a hunk went to waste.
A fairy tale about three raptors, a slightly dim prince, and a very clever princess. This was a fun read, and I liked the fairy-tale narrative voice, which hovered just on the right side of twee. It's fun to imagine the kind of fairy tales dinosaurs would tell. There were also good jokes about dinosaurs pretending to be human. Some of the gender stuff got a little too straightforward, though-- all of the women were clever, all of the men were stupid. I read fiction to be challenged, and that component of the story was too obvious.

4. "The Secret Lives of the Nine Negro Teeth of George Washington" by Phenderson Djèlí Clark
When George Washington wore Solomon’s tooth, he dreamed of a place of golden spires and colorful glass domes, where Negroes flew through the sky on metal wings like birds and sprawling cities that glowed bright at night were run by machines who thought faster than men.
Set in a fantasy world, this story provides accounts of nine Negro teeth used by George Washington, each from a different person, each of which comes with some kind of magic, and each of which has some kind of effect on him. I would say that I admired the conceit more than I enjoyed the story per se, which is what made me give a slight edge to "A Witch's Guide to Escape," but I would say they're pretty much on par with one another.

3. "A Witch's Guide to Escape: A Practical Compendium of Portal Fantasies" by Alix E. Harrow
(There have only ever been two kinds of librarians in the history of the world: the prudish, bitter ones with lipstick running into the cracks around their lips who believe the books are their personal property and patrons are dangerous delinquents come to steal them; and witches).
A librarian who is also a witch tries to help a boy living a rough life by giving him the books he needs, fantasies of escape (some exist in our world, like A Wizard of Earthsea; some do not but are of a recognizable type, like the fourteen-volume Tavalarrian Chronicles). I enjoyed it, but the narrative voice was at times a little twee. The fantasy element is slight, but deployed potently.

2. "STET" by Sarah Gailey
I read the weighted decision matrix they used to seed the Sylph AI. I learned to read it. Do you know how long it took me to learn to read it? Nine and a half months, which is some kind of joke I don’t get. The exact duration of bereavement leave, which is another kind of joke that I don’t think is very funny at all, Nanette in HR.
This was a very cleverly told tale. It's a 100-word excerpt from a textbook on autonomous cars, with 800 words of footnotes, and then comments from an editor on the footnotes, and then rebuttal comments from the author. A story begins to emerge in all this, about a girl who died. It's cleverly told, and kind of touching, too. I think there's a real point in here, as well (though some of its fearmongering seems kind of overblown, along the lines of this Radiolab episode). The on-line version is neat, but the version in the print edition-- where the comments are handwritten-- is more effective.

1. "The Court Magician" by Sarah Pinsker
The first time he says the word, he loses a finger.
As always, Pinsker nails it, with a clever concept well told. A kid magician from the streets is elevated to become the court magician, and goes from illusions to practicing real magic. Only, the real magic exacts a cost, as he slowly loses everything that he loves. But he keeps going on, because he must know how it works, always wondering if real magic is just another form of illusion. This one sucked me in and kept me going, a perfect little story.

Best Novelette


6. "The Thing About Ghost Stories" by Naomi Kritzer
Something had arrived in a padded envelope, and when I saw the return address, I tore it open eagerly. It was a first-off-the-press copy of The Stories We Tell in the Dark—my book.

I set it down on the counter and just looked at it for a minute. It was published by the Indiana University Press and it looked really good: the cover image was a fog-shrouded forest, very spooky looking without appearing so much like a book for the layperson that no respectable folklorist would consider assigning it to their students in class.
This is essentially just a ghost story. A very well-told ghost story, layered with literary details, but nonetheless not much actually happens in one sense, and things play out fairly predictably. But then again, the story is about the predictable nature of ghost stories, something the story itself sign-posts from the second paragraph, and I still felt tension as the story drew to a conclusion. As an academic, I appreciated the story gets academia largely right, and I found it really well done in parts. But it's still "just" a ghost story.

5. "Nine Last Days on Planet Earth" by Daryl Gregory
“Beauty’s just”—he made explosion fingers—“joy in the brain, right? A flood of chemicals and, and, and—” What was the word? “Fireworks. Neuronal fireworks. We don’t logic our way to beauty, it hits us like a fucking hammer.”
In 1975, strange alien seed pods fall to Earth, blanketing the world, and ten-year-old LT watches. The story jumps ahead in increasing intervals, covering LT's life in this new world. It's a great story, moving and unsettling at the same time, though maybe a little too obviously sentimental. I really enjoyed reading it, but I think that to be ranked higher, it would really need to do more with its sfnal element. Hugo-nominated short sf often feels reluctant to embrace its speculativeness, to prefer to tell literary fiction with speculative trappings. Which is fine, sometimes I like that approach a lot, but award-nominated stuff seems like it should be pushing harder.

4. "If at First You Don't Succeed, Try, Try Again" by Zen Cho
Leslie cleared her throat. “I didn’t get tenure.”

Byam had learned enough about Leslie’s job by now to understand what this meant. Not getting tenure was worse than falling when you were almost at the gates of heaven. It sat down, appalled.

“Would you like me to eat the committee for you?” it suggested.
An imugi (the worm-like nascent form of a dragon) keeps trying to ascend into a dragon and failing, but then it gets sidetracked when it meets a physics graduate student who ruined its most recent attempt. This was really good and kind of moving, and that I loved it but still ranked it down in fourth is a testament to how strong the novelette shortlist was this year. I think "When We Were Starless" and "The Last Banquet" both give me what I want out of sf/f a bit more, but this really got me in the heart, and it has some good jokes, too.

3. "When We Were Starless" by Simone Heller
We told ourselves that we made a difference, that we shaped a world, but one look at this ruined vastness told the truth: we didn’t change a thing, and all our sacrifices were just to survive another day. It was enough, mostly, as long as we pretended it didn’t tear our hearts out.
I struggled to rank this one vs. "The Last Banquet." "When We Were Starless," which follows a member of a sentient race of reptiles on an Earth polluted and abandoned by humanity, is more to my taste as speculative fiction; I love the world and imagery it conjurers up. But at times it is a little too immersive. Heller resists unnatural exposition quite successfully, which sometimes meant scrolling backward and forward while I tried to make sure I understood what happened, which occasionally undermined the story's emotional effect. But I did really like it. It has that aspirational tone of the best (to me) sf. We live in a world without stars, but we know they are there.

2. "The Last Banquet of Temporal Confections" by Tina Connolly
“You will see pain,” she said. “Not your own pain, but another’s. A moment of exquisite pain that someone else is suffering.”
A really clever story, well told, where pastries, properly prepared with the right herbs, can invoke memories in the eater: Rosemary Crostini of Delightfully Misspent Youth, Fennel Flatbread of Sunlit Days Gone By, and so on. The story is told from the point of view of the pastry chef's wife, who serves as taster to the king, so that the pastry chef cannot poison the tyrant king. The story alternates between the present day (a Banquet of Temporal Confections) and the memories invoked by the pastries. A neat idea that enables a neat exploration of memory, with a clever conclusion. I do kind of wish there was more sf in the short fiction categories, but this was good fantasy.

1. The Only Harmless Great Thing by Brooke Bolander
No matter what you did, forty or fifty or a hundred years passed and everything became a narrative to be toyed with, masters of media alchemy splitting the truth's nucleus into a ricocheting cascade reaction of diverging alternate realities.
The premise of this book sounds wacky if you try to explain it to someone: in an alternate reality where elephants are sentient, they are hired to replace the Radium Girls after it comes out how dangerous it is to work in the factories. The book alternates between elephant myths, a former Radium Girl hired to train them, and a researcher in the future, negotiating with the sovereign elephant tribes. But Bolander makes it work, and how. It packs a lot into its short length; it's about history, and labor, and our treatment of animals, and even Disneyfication. I complained in my write-up of "Last Banquet" that I wanted more sf, and I complained in my write-up of "Nine Last Days" that I wanted the sf elements to be more than props, and this story gave me exactly what I wanted on both accounts.

Best Novella


7. Binti: The Night Masquerade by Nnedi Okorafor

This is the only novella finalist I'd read before the ballot came out; in my review, I said it had a "muddled emotional throughline, an overly meandering plot, and too much happenstance." I liked each Binti novella less than the previous one, and this was the third.

6. The Tea Master and the Detective by Aliette de Bodard

It's like Holmes and Watson, except they're both women, and it's in space, and everyone's Vietnamese, and Watson is a former military spaceship traumatized by the death of her crew. I mean, why not? This had lots of great concepts (the Watson-analog spaceship makes money by brewing teas designed to manipulate the brain in specific ways), but as happens a little too often with novellas, I felt like the execution didn't completely live up to the idea; the emotional climax was a little subdued, and the mystery isn't really the focus, disappointingly.

5. The Murderbot Diaries: Artificial Condition by Martha Wells

The sequel to last year's winner is nowhere near as good. All Systems Red was a quick, engrossing action story with a distinct narrative voice. Artificial Condition is slow-moving (I wasn't sure what the story was even going to be about until I was a third of the way in) and the narrative voice is much more bland; I got much less of a sense of character off Murderbot than before. I didn't really get why it thought the so-called "asshole research transport" was an asshole; that seemed like a good joke that had been inadequately set up. I got more out of this than Tea Master, but even though Beneath the Sugar Sky was somewhat unfulfilling, it was at least trying to do something more than this ultimately hollow action piece.

4. Beneath the Sugar Sky by Seanan McGuire

The third Wayward Children book is definitely better than the second, but not as good as the first. In this one, four of the kids (all children who returned to Earth after visiting fantasy worlds via portals) go on a quest to resurrect a dead classmate, in order to ensure the existence of her future daughter-- who is on the quest with them. It's good, but not as good as it should be. McGuire's narrator likes to offer a lot of wise-sounding insight, but would benefit from being more attentive to character; each character has an elaborate backstory, but they often don't feel like they really matter, their actions in the present being kinda interchangeable, including the character who doesn't even want to be on a quest. It's entertaining, though (I like a portal-quest fantasy), and makes better use of the central concept than the second book did. Kept my attention more than Tea Master but didn't entertain me as much as Black God's Drums.

3. The Black God's Drums by P. Djèlí Clark

The best part of this book was its first-person narrative voice, told from the perspective of a black street urchin with an African goddess in her head-- in a steampunk New Orleans in a timeline where the Civil War ended in a draw, but New Orleans is neutral territory. The main character must get help from an airship smuggler captain when it turns out Confederate racists are building a superweapon in secret, in violation of the treaty. It's good fun, with strong worldbuilding and character. Its main weakness was that it felt a little set-up heavy, with not enough actually happening, and I dithered on how to rank it versus Tea Master, but ultimately decided I definitely want there to be a sequel, so Clark kind of gets away with it.

2. Gods, Monsters, and the Lucky Peach by Kelly Robson

I liked this more than any of the other novellas on the shortlist this year. It has interesting worldbuilding (a post-environmental collapse where humans are beginning to reclaim the surface, but different people see it different ways), well-drawn characters, lots of interesting little details, a good sfnal hook, some sharp action sequences, and some good discussion of big ideas. I particularly liked the blending of the fantastic and the mundane: the main character works for an environmental reclamation organization, and has to submit a funding proposal... for a time travel project! But it was a bit too slow moving as the preparation of the grant proposal went on, and though I don't mind a story, especially an sf story, that leaves things open, several key questions posed at the story's beginning go unanswered. It's definitely doing more than any other novella finalist... but it feels more like the opening section of a novel in some ways.

1. No Award

Am I overly grumpy for doing this? Yes, but I am doing it anyway. 2017's novella line-up was outstanding, 2018's had a couple good ones, but 2019's ranges from terrible to above average, and I refuse to rank "above average" as my number one choice for a Hugo Award. Can I say what the problem is? Not really. It's tempting to blame Tor.com (all of these finalists bar The Tea Master and the Detective were their work), but they all have different problems. Gods, Monsters feels like a part of a novel, not a novella; Black God's Drums is a good action story that doesn't use its worldbuilding; the Wayward Children books probably should have stopped after the first one; Murderbot was fun before but this sequel was dull; and Binti is just bad. Several of them, though, suffer from the problem of coming up with good worlds or ideas, but failing to tell good stories about those ideas. I'd like to see a more diverse novellas shortlist in future, but given I only catch up on short sf with the Hugos, I won't be contributing to this myself.

Overall Thoughts


Short story was also a weak category this year; only "Court Magician" had the depth I would want of a Hugo finalist, even though many of the remaining stories were fine. I ranked a Sarah Gailey piece below in No Award in both 2017 and 2018, so I was wondering if it would happen again and if I just didn't get on with their writing, but 2019 shows they can impress me.

Oddly, I felt Best Novelette was highly competitive this year. In 2017, it had one clear frontrunner; in 2018, nothing set me alight. My theory was that the novelette is a fake form. There are no novelettes, just novellas that under-ran or short stories that weren't cut down. But 2019 has proved me wrong, with two excellent stories, three great stories, and one very good story. "Nine Last Days on Planet Earth" would have topped my ballot in 2018, but this year it must languish down in fifth!

I think Muderbot will win Best Novella; if not, it'll be Binti. The other two short fiction categories don't have any obvious top contenders, in my opinion, so I'll be curious to see what sifts to the top.

01 August 2019

Reading Roundup Wrapup: July 2019

Pick of the month: Spinning Silver by Naomi Novik. Ain't it the way of it? Months and months where I have one "pretty good" book as an obvious best... and then a month where I read not just one excellent book, but two! It was hard for me to pick between Spinning Silver (a finalist for the 2019 Hugo Award for Best Novel) and Jeanette Winterson's The Gap of Time (a SantaThing gift), as both were moving, insightful, gorgeously written books. I ended up settling on Spinning Silver because I felt it stuck the landing better than Gap of Time did. (Not that Gap had a bad ending, just that it began more strongly than it ended.)

All books read:
1. Star Trek: Typhon Pact: Brinkmanship by Una McCormack
2. Spinning Silver by Naomi Novik
3. The Murderbot Diaries: Artificial Condition by Martha Wells
4. Transformers: The Wreckers Saga by Nick Roche with James Roberts
5. Hexarchate Stories by Yoon Ha Lee
6. Star Trek: The Next Generation: Cold Equations, Book I: The Persistence of Memory by David Mack
7. Dread Nation by Justina Ireland
8. The Gap of Time: The Winter’s Tale retold by Jeanette Winterson
9. Star Trek: The Next Generation: Cold Equations, Book II: Silent Weapons by David Mack
10. Star Trek: Department of Temporal Investigations: The Collectors by Christopher L. Bennett
11. The Invasion by Peadar O’Guilin
12. Gods, Monsters, and the Lucky Peach by Kelly Robson

All books acquired:
1. Always Coming Home: Author's Expanded Edition by Ursula K. Le Guin
2. Nemesis Games: Book Five of The Expanse by James S.A. Corey
3. Blue Boy by Rakesh Satyal
4. Follow the River by Albert Mayer
5. Stringtown on the Pike: A Tale of Northernmost Kentucky by John Uri Lloyd
6. Legend of the Galactic Heroes, Volume 9: Upheaval by Yoshiki Tanaka
7. The Best Science Fiction of the Year, Volume 4 edited by Neil Clarke
8. The Craft of Writing Science Fiction That Sells by Ben Bova
9. Why Be Happy When You Could Be Normal? by Jeanette Winterson
10. Star Trek: Discovery: The Enterprise War by John Jackson Miller

Books remaining on "to be read" list: 651 (up 2)
Books remaining on "to review" list: 3 (down 2)

Almost cleared out my review backlog. Amazing!

31 July 2019

Hugos 2019: Saga, Book Three by Brian K. Vaughan and Fiona Staples

Comic hardcover, 464 pages
Published 2019 (contents: 2016-18)

Acquired and read June 2019
Saga, Book Three

Writer: Brian K. Vaughan
Artist: Fiona Staples
Lettering+Design: Fonografiks

Book Three of Saga continues the space epic, as Marko, Alana, Hazel, and their companions spend time on a doomed comet, on an abortion planet, and a water world. As always, Vaughan and Staples's work is propulsive, never immobile. One issue leads into the next into the next; one situation's resolution sets up the next problem. I found that this one was brought down mildly by some commentary on current events that was a little too direct and obvious for good sf (apparently in a magical space universe, people discuss trans identities and abortion rights the exact same way as in the 2010s U.S.), but the twists and turns of the characters are good. The themes that came to the fore in this volume were the appropriate use of force-- something Marko has really struggled with all along, and is brought to a beautiful climax here-- and the responsibilities of family-- there's some good contrast between Alana and Marko's approach to their child(ren?) and Prince Robot's. There are some real sad moments, and some real uplifting ones, and some disturbing moments. I'm sad that the series is going on an extended hiatus after this, because I want it to keep going now!

This deluxe edition has some nice stuff from Vaughan and Staples about the genesis of the series, which goes back to a universe he imagined in math class as a kid. And of course I loved Fonografiks's discussion of what typeface to use for the logo!

30 July 2019

Review: Doctor Who: Toy Soldiers by Paul Leonard

Acquired May 2008
Read February 2019
The New Doctor Who Adventures: Toy Soldiers
by Paul Leonard

This was better than I expected based on the book's reputation, but not particularly good. The Doctor and his companions investigate children disappearing in post-Great War Europe, and of course it's aliens fighting an interminable war who need recruits. Nice atmosphere, and Chris and Roz got a lot of interesting stuff to do, but Benny was wasted, and the story went to some pretty banal places.

Next Week: The return of the Sontarans in Shakedown!